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Wish I was the finger inside Nono's nose : . (

i'm not going to review the story or plot, because i find it incredibly bad to begin with (Serious drama + MMORPG's do not mix well)

The animation was just as lazy as the other episodes. the majority of the lip-syncing was just looping frames. The Backgrounds were just basic shapes with heavy gradiant use, which looks lazy as well.
Constant text font change made it incredibly hard to read, it's not even necessary, the voicing is clear enough to not need it, but it's to go with the MMORPG feel, alright, but not every character need their own unique(?) text font. And eye-wrenching color use made my eyes hurt (that green ring the monster used, and other moments).

One of my major (of many) problems with this episode is when Zetto and Alpha fight, you switched Zetto's hands constantly, i could understand if it was a one time mistake, but it happend EIGHT times, you should at least make the effort to fix something that's obviously wrong even if it means you have to upload the video on a later date.

One thing i will say looked nice was the tournment poster, BUT i couldn't read any of it soooo.....

Needs much improvement, please work on your quality. I don't want to hate this series but i feel it's incredibly lacking in many areas.

Bad

although your animation in terms of movement is above average, and by average i mean what is normally uploaded on this site (1 - 2.5 star stuff), the simple plot of this is just awful. It shouldn't be hard to make an immature video about dicks and rape funny, but even you did that wrong. work on your writing, it doesn't matter if it looks good, if it's badly written the whole thing is bad.

FrostDrive responds:

I rated this helpful.

The line could have been a cleaner and when mario yells at Luigi he want's that flag it sounded like you were forcing it and trying to be quiet, if you need him to yell, yell.

But you knew what you wanted to make a joke about and you added some nice exaggerations, but clean up your lines. (if you don't have a tablet, get one)

Your backgrounds had nice perspective and the voices were clear. But, the writing was really weak in both dialogue and punchline delivery, it didn't make much sense nor was it funny. The visuals were really generic and the colors were incredibly bland, try using some Analogous Color Schemes instead of just a darker shade of the same color. The animation, although clearly trying to be fluent, was badly proportioned when moving. Also, don't just draw random scribbles to try to add detail.

I'm not trying to be a mean or anything, but i hate seeing people time and time again use lazy and bland methods of animation, writing, detail, and color to make videos.

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the sound and animation are a bit lacking, but the punchline was nicely done and funny.

nice

the animation was nice and simple (not to be rude) and i think you got the point across to any Chinese (again, not to be rude).

This is from 2008, so i can't really say you could improve on things.

Kenzu responds:

My skill is much better now!

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animation is good. just tweek the sound and humor a bit

nice

looks good, but i don't see much humor.

aDazeWork responds:

Thanks man..we'll work harder on the humor for ya.

a little note

when i looked up help for fallout 3, i found something that said "Fawk", the super mutant, was actually a girl.

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